I got my, thanks for participating, but you didn't make it, letter from Tokyopop, so I'm free to post my submission!
Title: Why I Forgot the Toilet Paper
Genre: Comedy
Pages: 4 of 19
Looking back on it, there is ALOT I would have done differently. For one, I probably wouldn't have submitted this story, or using these characters.
I would have spent more time and physically toned it on the computer, definately done the words on the computer (I ran out of time to submit and couldn't spend the 2 hours a page doing the text) amonst other things.
I'm not really looking for critique, unless you're like, part of tokyopop and are like this is what you did wrong.